If Only…
I sit here wondering about everything that went wrong for us Should I have been more… Could I have done more… Would you have loved me more… If… I had been what you thought I should be But… Never could be I am Sorry… Sorry for both of us And… what could have should have would have Been… If only… Copyright © 2013 Annie – Original PoetryAlways…I wish you peace, joy and happiness, but most of all I wish you Love.
As Ever, Annie
Dec 27, 2013 @ 12:54:45
Dec 27, 2013 @ 13:17:06
Beautifully done!
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Dec 27, 2013 @ 13:40:46
Thank you very much!
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Dec 27, 2013 @ 15:38:34
Beautifully reflective…if only! Nice
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Dec 27, 2013 @ 17:02:47
Thanks so much!
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Dec 27, 2013 @ 17:11:07
Write on, right on, Annie! You nailed it 😆
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Dec 27, 2013 @ 17:30:01
Thank you so very much … had to write this after I did the flash fiction for #FWF
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Dec 27, 2013 @ 17:41:57
That’s why you had two postings! 😆
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Dec 27, 2013 @ 18:05:09
Yep … that poem just popped into my head as I was waiting for the first one to post … my other site is a bit persnickety sometimes when it comes to publishing a post.
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Dec 27, 2013 @ 18:17:21
What is your other site?
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Dec 27, 2013 @ 18:19:21
http://www.anniestexasmusings.com
it is a more eclectic site … lots of poetry still, but commentary and flash fiction … drive by when you get time! I post to both every day.
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Dec 27, 2013 @ 18:21:35
Is the link on your site?
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Dec 27, 2013 @ 18:23:08
No … need to create a blog roll on Whispers
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Dec 27, 2013 @ 17:33:46
Ah, those “if only’s” are a killer. more nice work Annie!
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Dec 27, 2013 @ 17:35:01
Aren’t they though … thanks for dropping by and reading
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Dec 27, 2013 @ 17:36:19
no problem, I wish I had time to drop by more often! Ah, I think that’s a what if!
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Dec 27, 2013 @ 18:03:31
At least is is a maybe when!!!
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Dec 27, 2013 @ 17:36:34
or better yet, an if only!
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Dec 27, 2013 @ 18:03:56
Love it … LOL!
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Dec 28, 2013 @ 09:05:09
Yes !! The words that haunt us all!! Very nice!!! 😉
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Dec 28, 2013 @ 09:11:13
Thanks John
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Dec 29, 2013 @ 09:45:52
I am finding it interesting that all of our FWFs this week speak of those “what-ifs” connected to a lost relationship. Love is always filled with those type of thoughts. I do think after a while, we can come to the conclusion that being sorry does not last forever. Thanks for speaking a universal truth for all of us, Annie. 🙂
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Dec 29, 2013 @ 10:07:46
Wow … I am honored … thank you for your kind comments.
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Feb 19, 2014 @ 23:21:01
That true gift and empowerment comes from the presents that you are.
Presents: as in this moment.
Blessings…
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Feb 20, 2014 @ 00:01:21
Thanks so much Christopher … few get that point!
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